Haiku
H is for Haiku, poetry written in 5-7-5 syllable meter. Here are a few I thought of in certain situations. Please comment on your favorite, perhaps phrased as a haiku?
Composed during a stitching workshop:
Dang! Thread knots again.
Untangling messes with
my tranquility.
Composed while sitting in a radiology waiting room:
A knobby knuckle;
My doctor diagnoses
with radiation.
Composed while stuck in a traffic jam:
Sirens, flashing lights.
An accident lies ahead,
waiting time unknown.
Poetry and haiku creation have always eluded me. Well done!
ReplyDeletethanks--haiku is the only poetry I can do!
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ReplyDeletethanks, and good to hear from you again! Have fun with the Challenge!
DeleteI admire anyone who can attempt this so simple but complex form!
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Great post for H. And how cute, you got a haiku comment! Dang, some people are so clever.
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DeleteI agree with ALL the comments above!!! I'm amazed that you think of haikus in spare moments! Talk about keeping your brain active!!! I especially like DL's comment - how cute! And I liked the "sirens" one of yours the most, although I'm impressed with them all! Great job.
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